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A defeat is easier to swallow with a smile.
See you next Wednesday, when a new page will be published.
Pencils and inks below. Click to sell small but cozy apartment with great vistas. Ideal to incubate your eggs.
Una derrota es más fácil de tragar con una sonrisa.
Nos vemos el próximo Miércoles, cuando una nueva página será publicada.
Lápiz y tinta debajo. Cliquéalas para vender un pequeño pero acogedor apartamento con magníficas vistas. Ideal para incubar tus huevos.
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More like, if you can make jokes about it that actually make you smile, you’re well on the way to getting over it. But yeah, all good.
Oh, possible errors on this comic. Think both speech bubbles for panel 3 should be to Ace, they sound like what he’d be saying, one is to Witty. Second, the “that” should probably come off the front of the sentence “that we could have all died in that explosion.” Panel 4, should probably be a period after “fun”. And now I run before I get stuck with something like an “editor” title.
Sigh, thanks again for spotting that kind of stuff. Changed a couple texts in the spanish version this time and rushed/forgot the english one. Going bilingual sometimes sucks.
One last thing. If different colored speech bubbles are being used for Ace and Wity, in cels 4 and 7 either Ace’s are the wrong color, or they need to tail to Witty. I suspect the former. If the color’s random, okay.
The shade of blue chosen for each balloon is picked based on what the background color is below them, to make them stand out. They aren’t coded by characters. Color coding for balloons is something I considered when I started this part but finally discarded. The only distinction I make is between human and artificial voices (round vs rectangular balloons).