Part 02 – Page 19

By the way, I just noticed that the previous page was #200. Yippie!

Por cierto, acabo de darme cuenta de que la página anterior era la número 200. ¡Yupi!

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Robomeks enter what Darkstar and his boys called the Sanctuary. It's a dark place, quite similar to other parts of the sewer except for a little mound of waste formed by robotic parts. Darkstar and his bodyguards are staring at the girl which is kneeling on top of the mound. The girl stands up. She's wearing a pink dress which ressembles one of those used in classical dancing. She also wears an odd metallic band on her head. She looks sick. DARKSTAR: You aren't allowed here. You're not one of us anymore. SEWER GIRL: But I've found it, Darkstar. The Crown of Redemption. Now I'm not banished anymore... I... I... The girl puts her hands on her head and starts screaming in pain. Some electric sparks can be seen going out the metallic band. SEWER GIRL: My heaaaAAAAIEE! The girl faints. ACE: Did she faint like this before or is it something we should be somewhat worried about?

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“Did she faint like this before”, I think. And hmmm, zappycrown and nutty sewer bot. Something feels related.

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OK, fixed. And about your assumption, let me just say: hmmm….!

Actually, I should have asked if Vincent was talking about her scream and fall over, or the whole way she was behaving. I presumed the fall-over, if he meant her overall behavior it’d be “act” instead of ” faint and emphasis on “always”. Regardless, this is getting interesting.

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